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 Comments Actually I did wan't to add a small figure of Leo there! But I guess next time? XD
Well I have to admit it the water is a couple of textures that I deformed and merged toegether xD Actually the water isn't the only water source..she's on an open area at night,I think there will be probably moonlight light on her also,no? The art is called "Moondance" for a reason!! XD But I take note of that next time! x) Thanks you really much for the critique! <3   WHY DIDN'T YOU? xD
Hahah, but it looks awesome though  I know, but it's the strongest source, meaning the shadows would be more sharp, I think xD Whatever, I was just saying what I was feeling  You are welcome, I hope it wasn't harsh |
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I really love this piece of yours Mari, it has such a mystical atmosphere, and I can see Candy dancing like this. (I bet Leo is spying somewhere like the creep he is xD) *cough* sorry for that xD
Vision -As I said, it's a beautiful drawing, I love Candy as well as the background, which is magnificently drawn. I especially love how you drew those trees and the water is very realistic :3
Originality -Speaks for itself, I guess xD It's first time I see a dak matter fairy dancing on water
Technique -This is where I get a little critical. I'd personally like to see some more contrast in the shading, because the water beneath Candy is the only light source, it would give very lit up areas and smaller, very dark shadows. And the blue light would probably also be reflected in hair, skin and fabric, but otherwise I think it's great
Impact -The atmosphere is amazing, I already said that, but a little more dramatic lightning (see 'technique') would do it well
-I hope I wasn't too harsh, you know I love it Sama